Why Minerva commited suicideand the background details

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Why Minerva commited suicideand the background details

Post by HollyShort9 » Sat 22nd Dec 2007

This is a one-piece so I can express my hatred of Minerva.

Minerva called Artemis. "Arty," she cooed, delighted.
"What?"
"I was thinking maybe we could go for a walk in the park, Arty?"
"No. I have other plans, involving the fairies."
Minerva tightened her eyes. "And what would those 'plans' of yours be?"
"I'm calling Holly up on the fairy communicator she gave me," Artemis said, confused. "Why?"
"You love Holly more than me don't you!" Minerva shrieked into the earpiece. She slammed it down.
God, take me now, take me now, don't let me feel any more pain! she said. Of course Holly was delighted to hear the conversation. How did she hear it, you ask? She used her shield and picked up the manor's extension phone, of course.
Meanwhile, back to Minerva.

Minerva was sobbing uncontrollably on her bed. Artemis had always liked her, she had known it. But why had things suddenly changed? Was Artemis's love just a act to heartbreak her? Had Holly done something to do with it?

Of course the fairy had. Why hadn't Minerva seen it before? Fairies were quiet jealous creatures. They needed to be destructed.

Minerva sighed. But FOWL had always stuck up for the fairies. He would most likely fling himself in front of Holly if Minerva tried to kill her. Most likely and definitely.

Minerva sighed, wishing there was a way to end her pain, or start pain for others. Then she realizied there WAS a way to end her pain... but she would never get to see Artemis again, or at least be able to talk to him, or make herself visible to him. But oh well....


And so, ppls, that is what drove Minerva to kill herself. ^_^
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Post by ARTY'SELFFRIEND » Sat 22nd Dec 2007

oh......... um.......... how do I put this gently? THIS ROX MY SOX! :razz:
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Post by HollyShort9 » Sat 22nd Dec 2007

ARTY'SELFFRIEND wrote:oh......... um.......... how do I put this gently? THIS ROX MY SOX! :razz:


Thank you, thank you (bows and falls off of stage by accident, starts laughing histerically)
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Post by Cabaline » Sun 23rd Dec 2007

Wow, This really does express your hatred of minerva :D .

HollyShort9 wrote: She used her invisibility thingie

was artemis's love just a act to heartbreak her?


Just a couple tiny little things, What is her invisibility thingie? Is it when she shields?

"A act" should be an act. Should it be "to break her heart" not heartbreak her?

Besides these couple of little things it was quite good :razz: . You have fanfics in your blood, are you going to write about what happened after minerva commited suicide? I think that would be something you could make very interesting.
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Post by veelagirl » Sun 23rd Dec 2007

i like it! join the hatred of minerva! woot! hahaha minerva killed herself.... :lol: i like the story! DIE MINERVA DIE!! :rofl:
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Post by private k stewart » Sun 23rd Dec 2007

KWL, minerva acting like a spoilt brat, loved it
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Post by HollyShort9 » Sun 23rd Dec 2007

cabaline wrote:Wow, This really does express your hatred of minerva :D .

HollyShort9 wrote: She used her invisibility thingie

was artemis's love just a act to heartbreak her?


Just a couple tiny little things, What is her invisibility thingie? Is it when she shields?

"A act" should be an act. Should it be "to break her heart" not heartbreak her?

Besides these couple of little things it was quite good :razz: . You have fanfics in your blood, are you going to write about what happened after minerva commited suicide? I think that would be something you could make very interesting.

Oh yeah. I forgot what her shield was called just as I was about to write the word "shield", so I just put in "invisibilty thingie". I'll edit it.
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Post by Cabaline » Sun 23rd Dec 2007

Lol, I get memory lapses all the time, you're not alone :D .
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Post by HollyShort9 » Sun 23rd Dec 2007

cabaline wrote:Lol, I get memory lapses all the time, you're not alone :D .


That makes me feel better. Sometimes when I was a kid I would start looking for a toy in my closet and then forget what I was doing. Lol.

Anyways, I edited it but the edit didn't appear.
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Post by veelagirl » Mon 24th Dec 2007

well thats helpful ;)

i like that idea. i once wrote a tiny fanfic (not published) about minerva in a temper... and then she had a REALLY bad dress sense and tried (and failed) to flirt with arty. then she took illegal drugs, nearly killed holly and got carted off to jail. it was funny :D
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Re: Why Minerva commited suicideand the background details

Post by 1hollyfan » Mon 24th Dec 2007

Any particular reason you hate Minerva? I don't share your hatred, and I think if it was a different storyline, but with your style of writing, I would really enjoy it. I'll give it a 7/10.
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